Jul08
I don’t think my wife liked this page because the old man died. She just looked at me and pouted after she read it.
Storytelling: Engaged!
The worst thing a story can illicit is indifference. “Don’t be boring” is good writing advice. — unless the title of your story is “1001 Bedtime Stories for Jaded Insomniacs.” Then you could probably get away with it.
Doh, poor kid, all alone on the island. And he doesn’t even have a soccer ball named Wilson to help him out!
Unfortunately his soccer ball was a Dollar Store knockoff named Frank.
Wow yeah. Smack! Looking forward to seeing where you take this!
– Luke
Thanks, Luke!